Wednesday, January 27, 2010

The real and the apparent



To capture the real in the apparent
Is tough. Yet the trouble doesn't end
There. What if the both merges into
form one terribly unreal world to us?

4 comments:

Unknown said...

To capture the real in the apparent
Is tough. Yet the trouble doesn't end
there. What if the both merge to form an unreal world?

Quote corrected by Mona :)

Chasing my shadow said...

Thats very good, Mona! I did it to lengthen the lines.

Your rendering conveys the meaning in full.

Lovely :)

Unknown said...

Thank you :)
But pls dont mind my doing... I just felt like altering it - tats all!

Chasing my shadow said...

Thats all right dear Mona, you are my dearest reader! You can alter them all you want! Its not as if I am the biggest poet around!